I love how in your story, you've told us enough to generally understand the world, but then rather than throwing an exposition at us, you've teased us and made us want to hear/ask for the back story, so when it's time to tell it we're eagerly zoomed in. Awesome job :)
Why thank you!
The trick about giving information in a story, its best that you let your audience learn it through a character's experiences. Doesn't mean infodumps are completely bad however. There are times it becomes necessary.
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